Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Exercise & Review

I reviewed John's assignment and he did a good job rewriting the software engineer's instructions. I liked how:
  • Short and concise it was
  • Referencing using parentheses
  • Using quotes to name directories, icons and links
Things that could change:
  • Needed a title
  • Needed better line spacing to make it easier to read
  • Added the line for addition help go to Online Windows Help


Sharing Drives Under Windows 95

4 comments:

The Mighty Kat said...

Good job. I like that you employed technical writing document design and you identified both strengths and weaknesses.

John Park said...

Thanks for the professional opinion. ;)Made it easy to read and understand. Don't know how I missed the part about Online Windows Help.

K.S.Worland said...

I like that you provided positive and negative feedback. It helps someone identify not only what they did right and should continue implementing, but also what they need to work on. Great job

K.S.Worland said...

I like that you provided positive and negative feedback. It helps someone identify not only what they did right and should continue implementing, but also what they need to work on. Great job